Subject: Re: The More Things Read on "Black and Blue" (LEMON) Date: 10/17/97 4:14 PM Received: 10/17/97 5:00 PM From: Mike Loader, mike@thekeep.org To: RPM - acct 3/5, rpm39788@Bayou.UH.EDU CC: Lara Bartram, lara@emunix.emich.edu fanfic list, fanfic@fanfic.com On Thu, 16 Oct 1997, RPM - acct 3/5 wrote: > REVIEWER'S NOTE: > The More Things Read features the newcomers from the fanfic series > 'The More Things Change'(available at http://www.uh.edu/~rpm/fanfic.htm) > and past reviews are archived at Travis Butler's site, > http://www.tfs.net/~tbutler/FFC/Muho.html Read em, collect em, trade em with your friends. > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > WARNING: REVIEWING A **LEMON** FIC > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > Once upon a time there were these four siblings, who happened to > be martial artists, who also happened to be movie buffs... And two fictional characters who, being too lazy to review in their own series, settle for sitting two rows back and commenting on the reviewers.... > One was a rather skinny fellow, looking a lot like Hikaru Gosunkugi, > the other a short-haired girl with a fair tan, the next a sloppily > dressed lad with long hair and eyeglasses, and finally, a rather > cute 12 year old with a hyperactivity problem.... > > ROLL CALL! > Ryo Muhoshin, snide yet debonaire > Ryoko Muhoshin, a teen girl with flare > Megs Muhoshin, a pervert beyond compare > Kyoko Muhoshin, tiny tot without a care Mike, who's description doesn't rhyme Kaeri, mildly psychotic Kasumi from Converging Series > Ryoko: So, what's up for tonight? Mike: Interesting choice of words. > > Black and Blue > > by Lara Bartram > > Ryo: Say... isn't Miss Bartram the one that wrote that.. um.. > the piece with Kasumi being... well... > Megs: Kasumi as a sex-kitten? Ayep, and this is a side-story > to her series 'Wolf in Samurai's Clothing.' > Ryo: 'Wolf in...' doesn't this have a lemon rating? > Megs: (Grinning madly) It suuuuuuuuuure does. > Ryoko: Oh my. > Ryo: Oh dear. > Megs: OH YES! > Kyoko: Huh? > Ryoko: Well... the last part we watched wasn't so bad... maybe this > won't be either. > Megs: (scowling) It'd better NOT be that mild. > Ryo: I've got the earmuffs. You got the blindfold? > Ryoko: Ayep. > Kyoko: HEY! NOT AGAIN! Kaeri: Very responcible elder siblings, Ryoko and Muhoshin-san are. I bet he'd make a wonderful father. Mike: Er, yeah. I think they should let the kid watch. That or just not bring her. Kaeri: Children shouldn't be left unsupervised. Mike: And they should be brought to a porn flick, and then tied up? Kaeri: It is _not_ a porn flick. Mike: Oh yeah? An why's that? Kaeri: Because I wouldn't enjoy it if it was. It's an art film. Now hurry up and bring on the nekkid Kuno. Mike: I think I prefered it when you just went berserk every other review. > > Kodachi opened her eyes feeling weak and disoriented. She had > > been having the strangest dream, though she couldn't remember any of > > it now. She struggled to sit up, realizing she was in her bed, > > wearing a nightgown. She tried to call out for someone, but her > > voice only squeaked. > > Kyoko: M-I-C... K-E-Y... M-O-U-*mff* > Megs: (covering Kyoko's mouth) Please, you're ruining the mood. Mike: See? See? Kaeri: Are you taking Megs' side over adorable little Kyoko's? Mike: *sigh* > > And then the door to her room opened and her father poked his > > head in. "My little wahine!" he said, charging into the room and > > embracing her tightly, tears trickling down his face. > > Ryoko: Eh? Wahine? > Ryo: Hawaiian term. Means 'daughter' or something. > Kyoko: Wai! HaWAIian! > Ryo: Kyoko... that was bad. Very bad. Mike: See? SEE? Kaeri: Oh, hush. > > Unused to the attention from her father, and the fact that his > > hold was rather tight, Kodachi struggled against him and tried to > > speak. Still no sound coming from her mouth, Kodachi pushed against > > his shoulders with her hands, but her arms felt like two sponges, > > completely without strength. > > Megs: If anything would feel like two sponges I would think it'd > be her t- > Ryoko: ENOUGH! > Ryo: Oh please, she's much more firm than a sponge. > Megs: And how would YOU know? > Ryo: Ah.... I heard a rumor. > Megs: Riiiiiiiiight. Kaeri: (darkly) He'd _better_ have just heard a rumor. Mike: Aw, c'mon. You cook better than Kodachi, you've got a better personality, and you're even more mentally unstable than her. No contest. Kaeri: I guess... > > Kodachi shuddered when her father kissed her on the cheek, > > still babbling about his 'little wahine'. She only wanted him to let > > her go and get out of her room. A disgusting thought occurred to her > > then; what if he had been the one taking care of her? She shuddered > > again at the thought. > > It would have been so nice if Ranma had actually cared enough > > to take care of her. Kodachi felt warm inside at the thought of the > > tenderness he would have shown her. Yet, she knew he wouldn't do such > > a thing. And even if he had wanted to, her brother would not have > > allowed him to do so. So maybe it was Tatewaki that cared for her. > > That thought, as simple as it may have seemed, sent shivers up > > her spine. Shivers of anticipation. She still wasn't able to take > > care of herself, she would still need help. Maybe he would help her > > in the bath... Hold it, put the brakes on! Just what was she > > thinking? > > Ryo: ... > Ryoko: ... > Megs: Er... okay, this ain't goin'in the direction I was hoping. > Ryoko: And what direction were you hoping for? > Megs: Well, there were these damn hot scenes with Nabiki in'em > where she was- > Ryoko: I get the idea. > Megs: And then there was Kasumi and- > Ryo: Enough! Kaeri: Better not be a Kasumi in this one. They're everywhere. Like cockroaches. Mike: Yeah, well, I wouldn't sweat it. I think we're in for an incestfic. Kaeri: Would Lara do that? Mike: Gleefully, yes. With great relish. She's done it before. Kaeri: Who'd she pair? Mike: Er... Nabiki and her son. Kaeri: She dies! Mike: Sorry, Lara... > > Sure he wasn't that bright, but he wasn't bad looking. And he > > seemed to care about her now. Though, first order of business was to > > get her father off her. It was entirely inappropriate. Finally, with > > one giant push, she managed to get him away from her. > > He looked at her a little stunned, before speaking. "Wahine, > > are you OK?" > > Kodachi nodded, her voice still on hiatus. > > Ryo: Contract negociations underway > Megs: A mid-season replacement is scheduled > Both: WAHAHAHAAH! > Ryoko: Morons. Mike: Until it's settled, Kodachi will be dubbed by the voice actor of 'Yosemite Sam'. Kaeri: "Consarnit, Ranma-sama!" > > "Good, 'cause I been so worried about you." > > This was entirely too strange. He had never been worried > > about her or Tatewaki for as long as she could remember. Instead of > > worrying about it, Kodachi pointed at the door. She just hoped he'd > > get the point. > > "But I can't leave my little wahine here all by herself," he > > declared, not moving from where he was sitting. > > Kodachi stared at him hard, but she could only see her > > reflection in his sunglasses. That stupid little palm tree seemed to > > be mocking her. She pointed again at the door. > > Megs: Oh look, it's Mr. Tree. Say hi to everyone, Mr. Tree. > Mr. Tree: Hi there! > Ryo: ... > Ryoko: ... > Kyoko: ... Kaeri: Hi Mr. Tree! Hello! Mike: Don't talk to strange vegitation, dear. > > "No. I'm not leaving you alone again, wahine. Who knows what > > bad things what might happen?" > > 'Bad things are already happening,' Kodachi thought. If only > > Tatewaki would show up and provide a distraction. > > "No, Kotchi. I ain't ever leaving you again." The tone his > > voice had suddenly taken scared Kodachi. > > She shook her head, pointing at the door. > > "But you're such a pretty flower, Kotchi. If I don't protect > > you, who knows what could happen to you." > > Kodachi was beginning to feel ill. Obviously her father was a > > lot sicker than anyone had ever given him credit for. She tried to > > push him away again, but he grabbed her wrists and forced her hands > > back. > > Ryo: Oh my. > Ryoko: Ew sick! > Megs: Shame on you for giving him naughty ideas, Mr. Tree. > Ryo: PUT THAT PUPPET AWAY! Kaeri: Oh my. Mike: So this is why all the Kunos are a few Tacos short of a combination plate. Inbreeding. > > Kodachi's mind seemed to blank at the prospect of what was > > about to happen. Wasn't once enough? Why did it have to happen > > again? And here she couldn't even find the strength to fight back. > > She wanted to scream, but all she could manage was a pained squeak. > > "Don't worry wahine, I'll make everything better." > > There was something about seeing her face reflected in his > > sunglasses that finally unlocked her voice. Kodachi screamed loud and > > long. > > Megs: EEEEEEEEEEEEEW! > Ryoko: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEW! > Ryo: Ugh. > Kyoko: Why's Kodachi's daddy holdin'her like that? > Ryo: ah... er... BLINDFOLD! > Ryoko: Got it! > Kyoko: HEY! > Ryoko: Earmuffs! > Ryo: Got it! > Kyoko: HEY! CAN'T SEE! Kaeri: Prompt action. Mike: But they never even answered her question! Kaeri: Well, I should hope not! Mike: Feh. Remember, if you don't talk to your kids about these things, they'll come to the wrong and horribly embarrassing conclusions. > > Tatewaki was drowsing in the basement. Ever since his father > > had returned, it had been impossible to get any sort of peace and > > quiet in any room in the house except the basement. > > He was stretched out in front of a small fireplace, the flames > > burning low as they warmed his side and stomach. It had gotten to the > > point that he just didn't care any longer what form he was in. Though > > he had to admit he felt more uninhibited when he was a wolf. > > And it was so nice to feel like he was in a cozy little oven > > the way his fur got real warm. Tatewaki rolled to his side, his back > > to the fire. His tail twitched unconsciously as he began to slip into > > deep sleep. It was the scream that woke him up. > > Ryoko: tail? > Megs: This is that werewolf fic, remember? > Ryoko: oh yeah. Mike: Yeah, Kuno gets tail in the werewolf fic, heheh. Kaeri: Oh, shut up. *frown* This is no good. I want a nude Kuno, and I get a golden retriever on steriods. > > The door burst open, startling Kodachi and her father. Both > > of them directed their attention at the figure in the doorway. > > Tatewaki growled at the scene before him. Whatever was going > > on, he didn't like. His father was... compromising his sister. That > > wasn't good. He stalked up to the bed and yanked his father away. > > Megs: Okay, this daddy-little girl bit really ain't my thing > Ryo: Ew. > Ryoko: ew ew ew. > Kyoko: Can't see! Can't see! Mike: Yeah, child molesting really isn't a fun topic for a lemon. > > Kodachi watched fearfully, thinking, hoping she was still in a > > dream, watching the whole frightening scene unfold in front of her. > > It began with her brother, looking angrier than any time she had seen > > him before, casually picking up their father and tossing him across > > the room. Then her brother walked over and calmly beat the snot out > > of her father. > > Ryo: Serves'em right. > Ryoko: Damn straight. > Megs: *whew* Okay, good going, Blue Blunder, now dump Kodachi > somewhere and go hump Nabiki. Kaeri: Ingrate! > *WHAP* > > Megs: OOOW! What'd I say?! > > > It looked like something fairly easy and straightforward. > > To Tatewaki, it was an agonizing decision, working against all his > > instincts. Or more precisely, pitting his instincts against each > > other. > > There was the thing that said to defend his family. But it > > didn't say what to do if his family was fighting each other. And then > > there was the more primal instinct that said there was a competing > > male attacking one of his females. The female/more liked family > > member argument won out, and he had turned against his father. > > Once he was pummeled into submission, Tatewaki went back to > > the bed and gathered Kodachi, unresisting, into his arms. Giving one > > last evil glare at his father, the two left the bedroom. > > Megs: Good. Outta the bedroom. Mike: Probably the first time Megs has ever been glad of two people of the opposite sex leaving a bedroom. > > Kodachi held on to her brother tightly, still disoriented and > > upset. She leaned her head against his chest, still hoping it was > > only a dream, but not minding if it continued for a little bit. > > She watched the walls move past, sighing to herself. Kodachi > > felt like she was seven years old again. That was all she wanted; > > someone that would take care of her, but no one ever wanted to. They > > were all afraid of her, or mad at her, but not her brother. Nothing > > she did ever seemed to bother him, which she was secretly glad of. > > She had no worries about him carrying her to the basement. > > Kodachi knew that their father probably wouldn't be able to find them > > in the maze-like sublevel, and even if he did, Tatewaki would take > > care of him. > > Ryoko: Nice to see a story where there's strong sibling ties. > Megs: Basement... er... > Ryoko: Something wrong? > Megs: Eh... nothin, I guess I'm worrying about nothing. Kaeri: It's always important for siblings to have a loving, warm relationship. Mike: Kinky. Kaeri: Not that loving and warm. > > Tatewaki carried his sister back to the room he had been > > resting in. There wasn't anything special about it, except he had > > made it his own private space, a place where no one would disturb him. > > Actually, he would just stay in it to sleep in front of a warm fire. > > But with Kodachi with him... Things were different, she was > > different. > > He sat on the floor, still holding Kodachi, cradling her in > > his lap. After what had happened upstairs, he couldn't let her go > > just yet, not until he was sure she was safe. He was very glad it was > > Saturday and the nurse who took care of Kodachi during the week hadn't > > been there. That just would have been far too difficult to explain. > > With Kodachi in his arms, clinging to him, he looked down at > > her, wanting to ease her fright. Except, when he looked at her, he > > saw the nightgown, that he had put on her, the way the dim firelight > > highlighted the gauzy material. By no means was his sister a > > mannequin any longer. She was very much alive, very warm, very soft > > in his arms. Tatewaki closed his eyes and tried to drive away the > > thoughts that were plaguing him. > > Ryo: Ah... is this... > Megs: This ain't going where I think it's going... I hope... > Ryoko: Eh? What're you guys talking about? Kaeri: Oh my. Mike: Hrm. I think we have the pairing for the story. > > Kodachi felt her brother's hands tighten their hold for a > > moment, then relax. She looked up at him and saw that his eyes were > > closed. Admiring the way the light played across the fur on his face, > > Kodachi smiled. It felt a little scary, the way she felt about him > > because she had never felt the same way about anyone else. > > Ryo: ... > Megs: ... > Ryoko: ... > Kyoko: I CAN'T SEE! I CAN'T HEAR! WAH! Kaeri & Mike: o/~ IT'S NOT UNUSUAL TO BE LOVED BY ANYONE.. o/~ > > It wasn't the same thing she felt for Ranma, it wasn't the > > same thing she felt for... Well, Ranma was the only person she loved. > > Besides her brother, but it wasn't the same. And her brother had done > > the same thing for her that Ranma had done. He had saved her, rescued > > her. A strange impulse overtook Kodachi and she hugged her brother, > > burying her face into his chest. > > Tatewaki leaned his head down over her, pleased to know she > > was grateful for what he had done. He really only wanted what was > > best for her, after all. Except... > > Megs: Except? Except what? Baaaaad feeling about this. Badbadbad. Mike: Except, the plot calls for them to screw like rabbits. > > Kodachi began to stroke her brother's back, leaving her face > > against his chest. She could hear and feel his heart beating, picking > > up its pace as she held him. His hands shifted, she supposed he was > > trying to be subtle about it, to hold her a bit more... intimately. > > Kodachi found that she didn't mind all that much. > > Ryo: erah... ar... er... I have no idea what to say. Kaeri: Oh. Oh my. Mike: Remember, it's an 'Art Film'. > > Adjusting both their positions, Tatewaki gently placed Kodachi > > on the floor while she was holding on to him. He shifted a little so > > he could lay on top of her if he wanted, but for the moment, he was > > content to kneel over her, wrapping his arms around her body. > > Kodachi was engulfed by a pair of long, furry arms, and > > immediately she felt safe. For a few moments, peace reigned as the > > two hugged each other. Yet, this was nothing like the nights they sat > > outside and watched the sky. This was something... different. > > Kodachi could feel it. > > Reluctantly releasing her hold, Kodachi looked up at her > > brother. Tatewaki unwrapped his arms and Kodachi quickly took his > > hands in her own. She squeezed them lightly, enjoying the way his > > skin felt against her own. His fur was very nice, but his skin was so > > much more... real. > > Ryoko: Fur? Skin? What the hell is this?! > Megs: Ooooohboy. > Ryo: Gah. Kaeri: It's just, just, sisterly affection. I give Akane hugs all the time. Mike: Kinky. *WHAM* Kaeri: NOT LIKE THAT. Mike: ...medic.... > > Kodachi dropped one of his hands and reached up to touch his > > face. She traced the sharp edge of one cheekbone and stroked the fur > > down her brother's neck. Smiling gently, her emotions going through a > > complete upheaval, Kodachi traced the collar bone, then moved her > > finger down the sternum until she could feel the abdominal muscles. > > She could also feel her brother's entire body quivering. > > Anticipation? Did it match her own? Her own anticipation for what? > > What was she expecting to happen? > > Ryoko: What the hell is happening?! Mike: Take a wild guess. > > She laid back on the floor, still holding Tatewaki's hand. > > Whatever happened, happened. Kodachi would allow things to develop > > and go as far as they could. She had really stopped caring about such > > boundaries a while ago because love had seemed like such an impossible > > goal for her. What difference did it make what society found > > distasteful when she didn't ever think she'd find someone that would > > really love her? > > Ryoko: Waita- They're not- > Megs: It... ah... looks that way, don't it? > Ryo: Um... I am... inclined to agree. > Ryoko: EEEEEEEEW! > > > Just once, just for a little bit, Kodachi wanted to feel what > > it felt like to be wanted. She wanted to know what it felt like to be > > loved, not as a sister, but as a woman. She wanted to know what real > > physical affection felt like, to prove that it wasn't all a lie. > > Ryoko: Kodachi you pervert! > Megs: Y'know, this is kinda like watching a car wreck? > Ryo: Oh? How so? > Megs: It's disgusting, yet we can't help but look. > Ryo: Scary but true. Mike: Well, the impact of it is dulled by the fact that Kuno's in his wolf form. So it doesn't really look to her like she's doing it with her brother. Kaeri: Yeah, it just looks like she's doing it with a wolf. MUCH better. > > With only her eyes, she begged for the physical attention. > > Looking deep into Tatewaki's eyes, she could see the same desires > > restrained. Just like him, but if the feeling was mutual... > > Kodachi sat up a little, her hair flowing freely behind her, > > took hold of both of Tatewaki's forearms, then laid back again, > > pulling him on top of her. She laughed quietly when she saw the > > surprised look on his face. > > Ryoko: Surprised look on HIS face? I'm damn shocked! > Megs: You are not the only one. > Ryo: Gah. Mike: Ah, 'snot that bad. Kaeri: Oh yes it is.. > > It was funny that he was just so... > > honorable and naive about everything. He had been having sex with > > Nabiki nearly every day for... at least two months and he acted like a > > blushing virgin. > > Kodachi ran her hands across her brother's chest, her eyes > > never leaving his. "You... you love me, right?" > > Tatewaki nodded emphatically. Of course he loved her. She > > was his sister; it was impossible for him to feel any other way about > > her. > > "And I... I... I love you." Saying that had never been more > > difficult in her life. "Please," she said quietly. > > Ryo: (stares at screen, suddenly crushes the soda in his hand) > Megs: (stares at screen, suddenly crumples the bag of popcorn in his > hand) > Ryoko: (stares at screen, bites down on the straw from her soda) Kaeri: Oh my! Mike: And the lemon portion of our program begins. > > That seemed to break the restraint Tatewaki had on his > > feelings. He gave one small nod then leaned down and held Kodachi > > against him, trying to make sense of what was going on. > > Kodachi whispered in his ear, "I want to see your face. I > > want to know it's you." > > Tatewaki could almost feel his brain smoke at that request, > > but it was impossible to refuse her. Whatever strange influence he > > had had over women, it was nothing compared to the power they held > > over him. Ending the embrace, he stood up and watched Kodachi settle > > herself on the floor, on his rug. She was on his rug, which meant > > that she was his as well. Sometimes his mind seemed to work in the > > strangest ways... > > Changing back to human, he saw Kodachi smile at him and > > couldn't help himself any longer. He got down with one knee on either > > side of Kodachi's body, then put one hand on either side of her head. > > Tatewaki moved his head down until his face was no more than two > > inches from Kodachi's. At that point, he was lost. How was he > > supposed to initiate this sort of contact with his sister? > > Ryoko: You're... um.... you're not... no... definitely not... > Ryo: Absolutely.... er... not. > Megs: Er, yeah... not... not... not. > Kyoko: CAN'T SEE! Mike: So much for the impact being lessened. Kaeri: Oh dear. And he always seemed like such a nice, proper, polite young hunk of beefcake. Mike: ... > > Kodachi could see the confusion on her brother's face. It was > > a look she saw a lot and knew it quite well. Unlike most times, she > > was just as hesitant, just as unsure as he was. She wanted to know, > > she wanted to experience it all, but the situation was so strange. > > Maybe it wasn't the right thing to do after all. > > Tatewaki licked his lips nervously and lowered his head the > > rest of the way, making soft contact with Kodachi's mouth. He could > > tell that Kodachi was surprised by the way she seemed to freeze up. > > Ending the contact quickly, Tatewaki thought he had done something > > wrong. Maybe he had misinterpreted Kodachi's meaning, and maybe he > > had just made the biggest mistake of his life. > > Kodachi looked at her brother, not quite able to comprehend > > what had just happened or the feelings racing through her. She > > swallowed and wetted her lips. It had been short, but sweet, and she > > wanted more. Kodachi lifted her head and kissed her brother, closing > > her eyes to concentrate fully on the pleasant sensations she was > > feeling. > > Ryoko: aeee...ur... > Ryo: ava... aa....era... > Megs: woooah.... Mike: Yow. Kaeri: Goodness. > > She was getting warm all over, and it wasn't because of the > > fire. It was getting to be that the nightgown was far too heavy and > > she wanted to shed it. Keeping her mouth engaged, Kodachi grabbed > > Tatewaki's hand and guided it to her hip. Tatewaki simply shifted his > > weight to balance on one hand while his other pushed Kodachi's > > nightgown up. > > Ryo: (pulls out a fan and starts fanning himself. Loosens his tie.) > Ryoko: (pulls out a fan and starts fanning herself. Undoes top button > of shirt.) > Megs: (wipes fog from eyeglasses) Kaeri: Oh my. They're really going to... > > Kodachi hadn't given it much thought before, but her brother > > had good taste in women's clothing and fashion. That thought went > > right out the window when a large, soft hand began to gently fondle > > her breast. It wasn't too rough and seemed to know what exactly to do > > to make her feel the heights of pleasure. > > Tatewaki stopped his ministrations and lifted Kodachi's hand, > > placing it on her breast, then put his own hand over hers. He applied > > gentle pressure and squeezed as if it was his hand on her breast > > instead of her own. > > Megs: MMmm.... firm breast... > Ryo: (stifles nosebleed with hankercheif) Kaeri: Oh. My. Mike: Need your prozac? > > Kodachi was definitely getting warmer, hot even. And then, > > when she ran her free hand down his back, fingering the waistband of > > his pants, he slowly lowered his body so he was laying on top of her. > > Kodachi could feel her brother's excitement pressing into her stomach, > > and wasn't so sure she'd mind feeling it in her hands, in her body. > > She wasn't so sure she'd mind doing anything he asked of her. > > With that, Tatewaki began slowly grinding his hips against > > Kodachi, testing her willingness with his tongue. And she was willing > > enough, battling back with her tongue and teeth. He ran his hand > > lightly up and down her leg, each time coming close to the elastic of > > the panties he had dressed her in earlier. > > The next time his hand came close to the the white satin, > > Kodachi made a muffled sound of affirmation. She felt Tatewaki's hand > > slide up farther, his fingertips catching the edge of the elastic and > > pulling up the band a little before moving up to the waist. As his > > fingers slipped into her panties, a sudden hesitation overtook > > Kodachi. > > Ryo: (nosebleed goes full blast, passes out) > Megs: (glasses in full fog effect) > Ryoko: (blushing an incredibly severe shade of red) Kaeri: Oh dear. Muhoshin-san passed out. Mike: Understandable. Blood from the nose, and blood rushing to his... Kaeri: Oh, quiet. > > The two of them shouldn't really be doing this. > > Ryoko: That's... er.. right... they.... shouldn't > Megs: Eee... eyah... shouldn't. > Kyoko: CAN'T SEE! WAH! Mike: Shouldn't, but must go with the plot. > > But it felt > > so good, and Tatewaki knew exactly what to do. He knew what to do > > even when she didn't. Tatewaki shifted his body a bit so he could get > > his hand down all the way into her panties. > > Ryoko: Megs, yer droolin on Ryo. > Megs: awahaaava... Kaeri: Oh, ugh. Mike: Oh, c'mon, it isn't that bad. Kaeri: I meant Megs drooling. > > Kodachi broke their mutual kissing and gasped. Tatewaki moved > > down, leaning on his one arm, and began kissing Kodachi's neck. > > Kodachi was beginning to breathe heavily, making little noises of > > surprise and pleasure. The hand that had been resting idly on her > > chest grasped her brother's shoulder and squeezed tight. The other > > had a hold of his pants and were keeping a constant pull on them. > > Kodachi didn't know if he had been born with the knowledge or > > if it was from lots of practice with Nabiki, but it felt like her > > brain was about to explode from feelings assaulting her. She wanted > > to tell him to take it one step farther, but again, her voice was not > > under her command. It felt like there was a fuse slowly burning down, > > whatever would detonate sitting at the point her brother's hand and > > fingers were working on. > > Tatewaki had gotten so carried away, he had almost missed his > > chance at really showing his sister what it meant to be the alpha > > male. He removed his hand from Kodachi's honeypot and pushed her > > panties down the rest of the way. He pulled them off her legs and > > tossed them aside. > > Megs: (in a faint, awe-struck voice) oh... my. Kaeri: That's my line. > > Kodachi's hands worked feverishly at the button of Tatewaki's > > pants before the two flaps finally came apart and the zipper was > > yanked down. Kodachi's hands immediately went down her brother's > > pants and began removing them from the inside. He wriggled a bit, > > helping her until he could manage to kick them off. > > Ryoko: (turns a deeper shade of red) Mmm... look at the size of his- > Megs: HEY! Kaeri: Ahhhhh. That's a big.... Mike: I don't wanna hear it. > > Kodachi put her hands around her brother's shaft, only to have > > have him yank her hands away. Tatewaki re-situated himself on top of > > her and resumed their kissing, both of them beyond control. The light > > from the flickering flames shined on their sweat covered skin as they > > moved against each other. Slowly but surely, Tatewaki was working > > himself into position, preparing to slip into his sister's warm > > wetness. > > Bracing himself on his knees, Tatewaki reached down and > > grabbed Kodachi's rear, lifting her pelvis off the rug, getting her in > > just the right position. It was the moment of truth, even though the > > truth had been discovered a while back. Tatewaki moved his head down > > and grasped the thin nightgown in his teeth. He pulled the nightgown > > up toward Kodachi's neck, then moved back down and rubbed his cheek > > against Kodachi's exposed breasts. > > Megs: (nosebleed starts, he struggles to control it while wiping > the fog from his glasses) > Ryoko: (fans herself furiously while taking occasional pulls on > her drink via straw. Tugs her shirt a bit) > Ryo: (regains consciousness, looks at the screen, passes > out again.) Mike: As they say in Amber, if you can't keep it in your pants, at least keep it in the family. > > Tatewaki shuddered then used his tongue to tease the sensitive > > areola, and opened his mouth. As he gently bit down on Kodachi's > > nipple, he thrust himself into her, the combined sensations sending > > her completely over the edge. > > Ryoko: (squirms uncomfortably in her seat) > Megs: (squirms uncomfortably in his seat) > Ryo: (nosebleed continues to stain the seat) > > > As her brother began to move, keeping his gentle hold on her > > breast, Kodachi found herself nothing but a mass of pleasure. Every > > touch, every movement, every thought was pleasure, was about pleasure. > > She nearly screamed as Tatewaki lifted her legs, hooking them around > > him just below his armpits. And then he really started thrusting, > > pounding into Kodachi, dragging his tongue all over her chest. > > Ryoko: (visibly sweating and very red in blush) > Megs: (visibly sweating and very red in blush) > Kyoko (blindfolded, earmuffed, and pouting.) > Ryo: (regains consciousness, sprouts another nosebleed, and struggles > to stay conscious.) Kaeri: Oh my. Wow. > > But Tatewaki wasn't satisfied. He lifted Kodachi up with her > > still impaled on him, and braced her against one wall. Kodachi > > stretched out her arms and held them flat, clutching at the wall, > > feeling her back rake on the stone as her brother began ramming > > himself into her again. > > Tatewaki had one arm under Kodachi's body, supporting her, > > while the other was back on her breast, squeezing and pinching, his > > mouth attacking her neck. This was far better than any dream because > > it was really happening, and there was almost no hesitation, no guilt > > involved. It just felt like the right thing to do. And it felt > > really, REALLY good. > > Ryoko: (faintly) I bet. > Ryo: (faintly) hm? > Ryoko: (faintly) nothin'. Kaeri: ... Mike: ... > > Kodachi was beginning to reach a point where she just couldn't > > help herself. She was losing control of her body, where it just > > seemed to do things on its own. She figured it had something to do > > with the mass amounts of pleasure she was feeling, combined with hard > > stone at her, making a truly intense sexual experience. > > As she slowly worked her way to her peak, she knew this was > > what happened when she watched her brother with Nabiki. This was what > > Nabiki always made so much noise about, and this was what she was > > about to experience. > > Tired of simply pinning his sister to the wall, Tatewaki > > removed his mouth from her breasts and pulled back a little. He gave > > himself just enough room to get his hand between their bodies, where > > worked his finger down to tease Kodachi's clitoris. > > Nabiki had complained that it was too distracting because the > > feeling was so intense, so Tatewaki, as best he could in the tight > > space, worked his finger around it, touching it gently every so often. > > He knew Kodachi was almost ready, so he wanted to wait until the final > > moment to surprise her. > > Megs: . o O (Must remember technique... must remember position...) > Ryoko: . o O (Must remember technique... must remember position...) > Ryo: . o O (Oh my!) > Kyoko: . o O (CAN'T SEE!) Mike: . o O (Cool, you can see their thought bubbles...) Kaeri: . o O (I hope Muhoshin-san is paying attent.. oh dear, this is a public thought bubble, isn't it?) > > Kodachi couldn't believe the animal-like noises she was > > making. Grunts and moans, sometimes punctuated by a 'don't stop' and > > her heavy breathing... It was like she was a wholly different person. > > This time she had nothing to grab onto as all the muscles in her body > > began to clench, and all she could do was arch her back, thrusting her > > pelvis out while squeezing hard with her legs locked around her > > brother. > > That signaled it. The clenching muscles meant it was only a > > matter of seconds. Getting in two more forceful thrusts, Tatewaki > > pinched Kodachi's clitoris and slammed into her, holding his position. > > All it took was for her to be near an orgasm for him to go, and that > > he did. > > Kodachi's entire body shook with the force of her feelings, > > her entire body seemingly trying to clamp down on her brother. Her > > arms flailed against the wall as she continued to move on his shaft > > even though he had stopped. This time, the feel of her insides being > > bathed in that hot liquid didn't bring a feel of disgust, only > > ecstasy. It wasn't an invasion this time, but a welcomed presence. > > After a few moments, in which Kodachi gritted her teeth and > > squeezed her eyes shut extremely tightly, her muscles relaxed, and she > > slowly came down from the orgasmic high she had just experienced. > > Kodachi slumped against the wall a little, feeling utterly exhausted. > > When her brother removed himself and held her gently, she put her arms > > around him and laid her head on his shoulder. > > (The siblings, except Kyoko, all look terribly uncomfortable and sport > fairly strong blushes) > Ryoko: er... ah... that was... > Megs: um... yeah... very.. um... > Ryo: oh my oh my oh my... > Kyoko: TAKE OFF THE BLINDFOLD!!! Mike: Not bad. Kaeri: (scribbles absently in notebook) Disgusting. > > Tatewaki carried his sister back to the rug and laid her down > > gently. He then retrieved a thin blanket and covered her body. She > > was almost asleep already, which brought a gentle smile to his > > features. His sister had finally escaped trap she had fallen into > > when she had been raped. Hopefully she could see what possibilities > > were ahead with the real love, reciprocated love, of a man. Not the > > one-sided obsessiveness or brutal display of power she had > > experienced before. > > Fetching his pants, he put them on with his back to his > > sister. He didn't see her eyes open and watch him as he finished > > dressing, then close again as he turned around. Kneeling next to her, > > Tatewaki kissed her forehead. "Good night, Kotchi." Then he got up > > and left the room. > > "Good night, Tatchi," Kodachi said as she pulled up the > > blanket and drifted off to sleep. > > Ryoko: (stands up quickly) um... gotta use the ladies room, back > inna bit. (rushes off QUICKLY) > Megs: I... cannot... stand. > Ryo: Why not? > Megs: (glares at Ryo) THINK about it. > Ryo: Oh. You know... neither can I. > Megs: Damn, I need a cigarette. > Ryo: (blinks, looks at his drink, frowns.) Damn, soda. > Hey, you got water in your glass? > Megs: Yeah, just water an'ice. > Ryo: Gimmie. (Grabs drink and splashes himself with it) > Megs: Damn. I needed that. > Kyoko: TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE OOOOOOOOOOOOOOFF THE BLINDFOOOOOOOOOLD!!!! Mike: Poor Kyoko. Kaeri: Well.. that was the... Mike: Art film. Kaeri: Art film. > -the end?- > > Ryoko: (returns) Hey... why're you two looking at me like that, ya > perverts!!!!! > Megs: I ain't looking at nothing! > Ryo: Please, as if I would! > Kyoko: Um... why's Ryo-niichan an'Megs-niichan blushing. > Ryo & Megs: WE ARE NOT! Kaeri: Oh dear. Ryoko had better lock Megs in tonight. Mike: Hmm.. actually, it seemed to me like Ryoko was actually the one least embarrassed about that whole thing. Kaeri: ... > -the end- (we hope) > > >